Here are some great pieces of advice on how to write fiction from some incredible novelists.
Don’t tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass. — Anton Chekhov
Good writing is supposed to evoke sensation in the reader. Not the fact that it is raining, but the feeling of being rained upon. — E.L. Doctorow
The first draft of anything is shit. — Ernest Hemingway